Serious American Dream

[Mickee]

Setting
The story begins in the heartland of America in a small town in the early 2000's, small enough where everyone knows eachother, that is until hundreds of people flock to the town...All those people are apart of a sadistic cult, out to 'free' people by any means. Some groups of people are there, the small town police force, fire department. No hospital as the nearest one is in the city located right by it. The cult enforces a blockade around the town, allowing people in, but never allowing them back out...Now to cut it to the people who don't understand this simple ass plot, a murder cult comes to the small town, picking people off slowly. Now you would apply for cult members and police force, yet be known you will be targeted as a police officer if this idea pulls through.


Length
Five days, the first day or two is people establishing their character, then the rest of the week is left to people and their own stuff with the cult.
Content
I have no idea what to put for this, as I did a complete rewrite.

 

[pew]

what the fuck did i just read

 

[Waptnt]

I have 4 questions on it;

One is why would NATO rename itself

Two why would Communist Mongolia get left out of this communist alliance?

Third is The battle of Berlin would turn into a Alamo situation cause Berlin was completely surrounded by Communist Eastern Germany . The fighting wouldn't last longer than a day.

Four being why would the alliance be labeled " The solution" when it'd probably just be as simple as Hoi4 calls it "comintern" for the communist Internationale?

 

[Kieck]

Four being why would the alliance be labeled " The solution" when it'd probably just be as simple as Hoi4 calls it "comintern" for the communist Internationale?

Warsaw Pact*

 

[Polioman]

It seems a bit far fetched but it doesn't seem too bad but the entire focus seems out of the picture: Like city rp sort of or military rp somewhat

 

[Mickee]

I have 4 questions on it;

One is why would NATO rename itself

Two why would Communist Mongolia get left out of this communist alliance?

Third is The battle of Berlin would turn into a Alamo situation cause Berlin was completely surrounded by Communist Eastern Germany . The fighting wouldn't last longer than a day.

Four being why would the alliance be labeled " The solution" when it'd probably just be as simple as Hoi4 calls it "comintern" for the communist Internationale?

I didn't put that the people dubbed them as such, and between civilians it stuck. I can use the proper term if you wanted me to do so.

 

[Mickee]

what the fuck did i just read

Its WW3 with a twist of a land war onto it, modern combat I guess...Just a idea though, and I pitched it honestly like shit cause I was tired.

 

[Mickee]

It seems a bit far fetched but it doesn't seem too bad but the entire focus seems out of the picture: Like city rp sort of or military rp somewhat

It would be mostly rp based kinda stuff, rp shooting is entirely S2RP, making the whole experience better in its own. And you could apply for something like citizen or such to be caught in the middle of the war.

 

[Chocolate]

buddy, to put it bluntly you're dealing with a bunch of nerds that are totally anal about details and logic. There's way too many holes in your scenario for it to be feasible for RR, let alone being interesting in general (Let's be honest, NATO vs. Commies WW3 isn't the most original idea).

I feel this needs a more in-depth rewrite if you really want this to be brought through for a whole week.

 

[Mickee]

buddy, to put it bluntly you're dealing with a bunch of nerds that are totally anal about details and logic. There's way too many holes in your scenario for it to be feasible for RR, let alone being interesting in general (Let's be honest, NATO vs. Commies WW3 isn't the most original idea).

I feel this needs a more in-depth rewrite if you really want this to be brought through for a whole week.

Did your rewrite to make it a even more simple plot, and I cant be called stupid for something that never fucking happened now.

Even if the plot now is shit lol...Now I'm acting like it wasn't always shit

 

[malina?]

Something tells me "sit in a town and hide from a murder cult" wouldn't be a particularly exciting thing to play out. What's there to discover? What's there to do other than surviving poorly written antagonists? I mean, come on, a murder cult?

 

[Mickee]

Something tells me "sit in a town and hide from a murder cult" wouldn't be a particularly exciting thing to play out. What's there to discover? What's there to do other than surviving poorly written antagonists?

The thing is that no one knows that they have a cult on their hands, so characters would disappear, you go about normal life with the threat of the cult. Its a stupid idea, I know it on every level. That's why this is my last reply so I can make this shit of a idea go away from the front page.

 

[malina?]

The thing is that no one knows that they have a cult on their hands, so characters would disappear, you go about normal life with the threat of the cult. Its a stupid idea, I know it on every level. That's why this is my last reply so I can make this shit of a idea go away from the front page.

You can request for the thread to be deleted, but there's not really much of a point to it. There's no shame in seeing one of your ideas fall flat; take it as a learning experience. Whatever it was before the rewrite obviously didn't click well with people, and neither does what's there now, but that doesn't mean you can't eventually cook up something people will enjoy.

 

[snuggles]

isn't this the plot to farcry 5 now

 

[Mickee]

isn't this the plot to farcry 5 now

It is?

 

[Levinx]

isn't this the plot to farcry 5 now

damn u rite

 

[kelso]

can we get the secret ending where everyone stands in a church for 15 minutes to enjoy some crab rangoon

 

[Benji Dooble]

farcry 5 rp cool

 

[Mickee]

Fuck my suggestion is a meme

 

[blooregardo]

Now I'm curious what the original thread was